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รบกวนช่วยตรวจความถูกต้องให้เราที ขอบคุณทุกคนที่ช่วยนะค่ะ I have never traveled abroad before.A memorable journey started when I was 11 years old.I have traveled to Hong Kong and Macau.I'm excited and very happy to get on a plane for the first time in life.And I was worried to have to travel far without parents.On this trip,I have to go with my aunt.On arrival,My family came to me at the airport.I'm excited about things in the airport.Whether the immigration,duty free shopping etc.After a trip by plane,I came to HongKong.HongKong is a place of tourist interest.There are various brands for shopping and food was delicious.After that,I went to Macau by ferry.Would I toured the Venetian.I have sat gondola.Yet it feels like to Venice.Going out in time,I feel a lot of fun.And will remember this wonderful journey with them forever.

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